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Sasha II: 1. Triple Stuffing "1... 2... 3!!!", yelled the giant mass of teenagers throwing up their graduation hats into the air. After a seemingly short school year, the senior class that Sasha and Alex were in finally graduated. It hadn't been that far since Sasha and Alex's confrontation that rainy afternoon, but they definitely did not mind due to school being out. This way they could finally get the pressure of school of their back for a little while before it was time for college. Also it allowed them to have fun over their summer, especially knowing that one "activity" that gave them both so much gratification.

"Alex we're finally done with high school! WHOOO!!
The Voice 1
The Voice 1

   Many years ago in a place named Chu Nan were differents kind of musics. The people that had the talent to sing or play any instrument go to the kingdom to play for the king, the king always search for the most talented one. But one day the king was taking a walk when he heard the most beautiful voice that he ever heard, he saw a young blue hedgehog singing and playing a golden fluate. The king was amazed to see a unique hedgehog and heard his music, the king wanted that talent and he goes to talk to that hedgehog. The blue hedgehog didn't wanted to leave the forest, he just play music for the nature of the forest, that make t
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 3
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 3

Shadow was actually in the beach enjoying the night sky, he was holding  the scarf that Sonic gave him. Shadow closed his eyes and lifted his head to feel the breeze. Sonic on the other hand saw a shadow he knew it was Shadow, he pop head out of the water he saw Shadow with his eyes closed enjoying the breeze of the ocean he lied on a rock. Sonic giggled he climbed on the rock Shadow was resting on, Shadow started to feel drops falling on his face, "Is it raining?" he though, Shadow opened his eyes and looked up to see Sonic, "Hi" said Sonic, Shadow just gave Sonic a small smile. Shadow got up to face Sonic but
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 2
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 2

 Deep in the mountains lived a Were clan, it's where all the Werehogs, Werebats, Werefox and other come to live, the had hot springs where they mostly wash them selves off, they were guide by the Werehog leader Shade, the uncle of Shadow the Werehog, who took his fathers place when he pass away. Shadow didn't mind not being the leader, he grew up to be a strong and talented hunter. One day Shadow wen't down the mountain to near by forest to take a walk, "Hey Shadow wait up" called out Mephiles as he wen't to the other Werehog, "Mephiles? What is it?" asked Shadow, "What can't keep you company?" asked Mephiles,
The Voice 2
The Voice 2

     Shadow was looking at the time, soon it will be dark, he was planning on going to see Sonic at night. Shade saw that Shadow was acting weird, "Shadow is everything alright?" asked Shade, "Yes, I'm going to the forest to play my guitar" said Shadow, "At night?" asked Shade, how Shadow would practice at nigth in a forest? "Yeah is more quiet" said Shadow."But what about the Voice and the dragon?" asked Shade, "Don't worry, I wont get in trouble and those are legends" said Shadow, Shade couldn't say no to Shadow, "Ok but don't be late" said Shade "Don't worry" said Shadow as he went to the forest.Shadow look at the sky it was
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 7
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 7

 Sonic was heading back to the castles but then he found himself with Marcy, "Hi Sonic" said Marcy, "Oh hi Marcy, I haven't seen you in a while" said Sonic, "Yeah well I have been busy and you?" asked Marcy. Sonic was a little nervous, "Oh nothing just at the castle and stuff" said Sonic, "Oh really cause yesterday you weren't around and also I saw something interesting" said Marcy, Sonic realized something and got a little suspicious, "Like what?" asked Sonic, "Well for some reason you were in the beach and a very hairy creature appeared" said Marcy, Sonic was now exposed Marcy already knew he's secret. Sonic
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 5
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 5

  Mephiles and Drake were talking about a plan to separate Sonic and Shadow, "So what should we do to separate the Merhog and the Werehog?" asked Drake, "Well it's obvious we have to keep a eye on them, and also watch there every move one kiss can ruin everything" said Mephiles, "How about sabotage?" asked Drake, "Sabotage?" asked Mephiles, "Yes it's a good idea we try to ruin Sonic and Shadow's little date" said Drake, Mephiles though it was a good idea and so he nod.

 "Sonic Don't let one little thing get between our friendship, please I....." Shadow didn't know if he should have finished that sentence the
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 4
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 4

 In the under water Kingdom, Jules was getting worried Sonic had left last night an didn't return, "Sir we have been searching and he is nowhere to be found" said his guard. Jules was extremely worried now, he then remember, "Bring me Tails the Merfox" command Jules, minuets pass and they brought Tails to the castle, "What's going on?" asked Tails, "Tails you are my sons friend, where is he?" asked Jules, "I don't know, I'm sorry sir, plus I haven't seen him in a while" said Tails. Jules was getting more worried now, his son vanish last night and now he is no where to be found, "Don't worry sir I'll search for
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 9
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 9

 Months had pass by, Jules become impatient because he's son wouldn't return Aleena tried her best to calm her king but it was no use, Shade explained the calm about Shadow and Sonic, and so they corroborated by helping protect Sonic, Marcy helped Sonic every mouth and became closer and closer than ever, Shadow learned how to be leader thanks to Shade and then that day came.

 Shadow was walking with Shade by the top of the mountain, Shadow looked down he could see the whole forest and beach from top, "Beautiful isn't it?" asked Shade, "It reminds me the first time I came with my dad" said Shadow, "I miss him
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 8
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 8

  Sonic was trying to wake Shadow up, "Shadow please wake up!" begged Sonic he quickly got out of Shadow's hands and put himself in a position that made him look like he was kneeling. Sonic was holding Shadow's head in he's chest witch also cover part of he's tummy, "Shadow please!" begged Sonic as he's tears slide down he's cheek. Scourge wen't to Sonic he was about to grab he's arm but Sonic, Sonic grab on to Shadow tight he didn't wanted to leave with them, "NO LEAVE ME ALONE I WANT TO BE WITH SHADOW" said Sonic, "Don't be a fool he's just taking a quick nap" said Scourge he grab Sonic, Sonic pushed him away
The Voice 3
The Voice 3

   At night Shadow went to the lake to see Sonic, after Sonic play his flute he was playing with Shadow running around the lake, until Sonic got tired and lay down were there are flowers. Shadow walk to him, "You got tired already?" asked Shadow, "I have never run like this for so long. Is fun and tired" said Sonic smiling, Shadow smile too, Sonic sit and grab a blue flower and smell it, Shadow blush Sonic look so cute doing. Then Sonic pick some flowers of many colors and was making something, Shadow sat down next to him looking what Sonic was doing, "What are you doing?" asked Shadow curious, Sonic giggle, "You'll see" said So
Sonic Diaries 1Sonic Diaries 1

            A promise to forget

  In little neighbor hood not too far from the town, there was a house near by a school, we're two kids with the age of 16 were moving in that house, Sonic the hedgehog and Shadow the hedgehog. "Well that's the last of the boxes" said Shadow, "Finally, you know for a house this is pretty big" said Sonic as he sat down on one of the boxes, "Hey Shadow where should I put this?" asked a yellow hedgehog who came inside with 5 boxes with him, "Just put them around, "Hey this is a nice kitchen" everyone knew that voice, the tree entered the kitchen to find a green hedgehog with a black jacket and
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 6
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 6

 Shadow didn't knew if he should tell Sonic or not, the fireflies were in front of Shadow's face, "What?" asked Shadow, the little fireflies landed on Shadow's hand that was near to Sonic's "You want me to grab he's hand?" asked Shadow, the fireflies made the words "Yes" Shadow didn't look at Sonic he was a little shy, he moved he's hand close and put it on top of Sonic's, Sonic felt something on he's hand he looked to see Shadow's hand was on top of his, Sonic didn't knew what to do now he was blushing a bright red and looked away as well, the fireflies each appear in Shadow and Sonic's face making the figure
The Voice 4
The Voice 4

 After Shadow spend the day with Shade at night he went to Sonic, but he didn't knew that someone was following him. Sonic had finish playing his flute and was on top of a tree eating some apples, then he saw Shadow, "Hi Shadow" said Sonic, Shadow look up and saw him on the tree, "What are you doing up there?" asked Shadow. "Me? I was hungry and decided to eat some apples" Sonic answered Shadow chuckles, Sonic saw like a house hiding between some trees, "Shadow what is that?" asked Sonic pointing at the house, Shadow look to were Sonic was pointing to and saw the house. "It looks like a house" said Shadow, Sonic went down and wa
Sonadow: StargazeR Love 6Sonadow: StargazeR Love 6

     Sonic was sleeping on Shadow's chest fur, Shadow had his arms around Sonic. Sonic have a small smile on his face, Shadow hear his phone and wake up quickly. He pick it up and saw that the Commander was calling, Shadow got up from the bed carefully to not wake up Sonic. He went to the hallway and answer the phone, "Commander, is something important for calling to me this late?" asked Shadow, "Shadow, you betray me" said the Commander. "I didn't betray anyone" said Shadow, "You have that creature in your home" said the Commander, Shadow eyes were widen, "How did he knew?" thought Shadow he don't know what to say
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Meeting in the Subway Chapter one

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Buttercup was getting ready for bed, as she was thinking of all the people she had gone out with. She dated Mitch for the heck of it, she dated Elmer because she felt sorry for him, and then there was Spade, from Citiesville. She hated that place with a passion, but she had met Spade online. As luck would have it, he turned out to be Ace's cousin, which would explain the green skin. She hadn't picked up on this at the time, but she felt stupid for not knowing it. "Stupid, stupid, stupid!" She had said to herself. She couldn't believe she hadn't noticed the similarities between the two. They acted the same, walked the same, and even talked, the same. How she hadn't noticed this, she had no idea. She just knew one thing for sure, it was late, and tomorrow, she was going to start her first day of school. She needed her beauty sleep. So she went to the bathroom, washed her face, and went to bed. As she slept, she dreamt of Ace, missing him.

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Chapter one of my story. I hope you like it. I know it's a little slow but it will pick up, just give it a chance. Comments and critiques are greatly appreciated. thanks for reading.
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~zzSnowWhiteQueenzz Jan 3, 2013
This is a bit short for a chapter, but it can work fine as an epilogue.

Personally I prefer Hibbles (wtf I have a fave pairing in PPG, wtf!?) Despite that, I think that AcexButtercup is a pretty good pairing.

To me, this does sound like an AU ficlet. Which I'm not a fan of, but hey it's your story do whatever you want with it.

But I must say, that Buttercup is OOC in this. I don't think she's the one to feel pity or spend time with someone just because of it. I can't imagine Buttercup dating load of guys, going out as on a one/two time date - possible, but not actually a mushy boyfriend-girlfriend thing. The beauty sleep - also I don't think it's a very Buttercup phrase.

Well all in all I think it's a decent beginning :)
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*Ramirez-Daughter Jan 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
whats's OOC and AU ficlet?thanks.
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~zzSnowWhiteQueenzz Jan 11, 2013
AU - Alternative Universe. It doesn't necessarily mean a fiction that is taking place in an absolutely different universe, this term is not limited to that. It basically means any type of fiction that is not consistent with the original.

OOC - Out Of Character. [IC -In Character]


No problem. I hope you're not offended, I honestly said what I liked and what I didn't like. This was a critique. You can tell me if you don't want me to comment on the upcoming chapters of your fic and I won't.
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*Ramirez-Daughter Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh no, I'm not offended at all! I would love to hear your critiques on my upcoming chapters!:hug:
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~zzSnowWhiteQueenzz Jan 13, 2013
Alright, if I missed any chapters you can send me the links.

[You still haven't replied to my note]
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*Ramirez-Daughter Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
did you comment on chapter 2 yet?
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~zzSnowWhiteQueenzz Jan 13, 2013
No, I don't thinks so.

And why haven't you replied to that note :icondeathstareplz: I know that it's your turn to reply :iconiseewhatyoudidthere:
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*Ramirez-Daughter Jan 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I thought I did
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~PurfectPrincessGirl Dec 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hmmm, good start so far, I liked it :D
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*Ramirez-Daughter Dec 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you I just posted part one of chapter two if you want to read it.
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